In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries. Is it a positive or negative effects.
It is said that in recent times with the development of many countries around the world. Many scientists that in the future the percentage of elder people will be higher than young people. Although this trend can have some advantages, the drawbacks may be far more significant.
On the one hand, there can be some minor benefits of a significant proportion of older people. First and foremost, elder people have vast knowledge as well as wisdom which can help them to solve not only problems but also make decisions easier. Therefore, in many big enterprises, the leaders are usually old people because they can convey their knowledge to their employees. Secondly, in many families, grandparents can care for their grandchildren, As a matter of fact, nowadays, with the fast-paced life parents have to spend many times working, so they do not have enough times to care for their children.
On the other hand, there can be some major downsides of the high number of old people in many countries. Perhaps one of these is that older people can also be a burden for the budget of many nations. The reason for this is that when they entire, they can not pay the taxes. Furthermore, the nations also need to invest money in building healthcare centers.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that an enormous number of elder people can be beneficial in some situations. However, the drawbacks involved are of greater significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90041493776 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71637539202 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3219556376 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8461538462 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276619406221 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107872215218 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12199293845 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180648206057 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892702606892 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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