In our world today, computer is used for a lot of purposeful things in the human race. Meanwhile, some scientists think that the level of intelligence in computer will soon out grow that of humans. In this essay i will be discussing how computer have more storage in memory than humans and how it functions.
Nowadays, computers are used for so many functions to assist the humans activities. For example, In the banks today every information of their customers are in the bank system. This enables fast and easier transactions between the banker and the customer. Computers stores different memories, so majority of people put their documents and files in the system to help them keep the memory exactly.
On the other hand, humans do most of their activities through computer. For instance, we are in the world where buying and selling are mostly carried out through computer, from any where in the world. After every business transactions it is stored in the computer memory for reference purposes and for as long as you want it. Meanwhile, as a human you can’t keep all your daily business receipts accurately in check in your memory for a long period of time.
Furthermore, most people prefer to have their interactions and conversations on chat especially the important ones. Like business and confidential matters, so that the chats can be saved and sent to the email. and it stays there until they take it out themselves. Also, because to the lager memory of computer one can be doing different things at the same time. You can be buying an air tick for instance, and at the same time you are talking to your business associate with no interruption unless you do not have an internet.
Finally, in my essay I have extensively talked about how computers will soon become more intelligent than human. Due to its storage in memory that even helps the human race stay accurate in documentaries. Almost all the activities in the world right now is done in the system for perfect check and balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'outgrow'?
Suggestion: outgrow
...l of intelligence in computer will soon out grow that of humans. In this essay i will be...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...stly carried out through computer, from any where in the world. After every business tran...
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Suggestion: period
...tely in check in your memory for a long period of time. Furthermore, most people prefer to...
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...ermore, most people prefer to have their interactions and conversations on chat e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66180085373 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7556168739 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8947368421 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242518172533 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741882889711 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089445280282 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148191608452 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989292969811 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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