International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, travelling overseas is becoming more affordable. In the meantime, many nations throughout the world are conducting new approaches to attract more tourists. From my perspective, the benefits that this trend offers, more job opportunities and cultural values promotion in particular, can overshadow its drawbacks, which is environmental destruction.
On the one hand, it is understandable that increased tourism has a negative impact on the local environment on account of the construction of more facilities and infrastructure such as hotels and golf courses to meet the demands of a rising number of visitors. Take Vietnam as a typical example, the regional authorities are permitted to cut down a great quantity of trees with a view to expanding the region, which can lead to the reduction of forest areas and contribute to global warming phenomena as well.
Although I accept that international travel may have a major shortcoming, I believe that its advantages outweigh those analyzed disadvantages above. To begin with, tourist service development provides the local employees with many job opportunities in the hope of responding to the needs of the travellers. As a result, it helps to improve the present economic situation of that country as well as enhance the living standards of the residents. Another significant upside of this growth is that the increased number of foreign people visiting another country would enhance tourism industries, contributing significantly to the wealth of that country. If those enjoy their trips, that destination can be recommended worldwide in the future.
To draw a conclusion, increased tourism has more upsides, which are to provide a greater employment rate and a means of promoting the local traditions, than downsides particularly environmental damage.
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- International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages 78
- International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, well, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24685090762 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0813033574 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254724460044 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834851198789 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617621811715 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128969361023 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383815215752 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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