Some people think that museums and art galleries should be be free of charge for the general public while others are of the opinion that a charge, even a voluntary charge, should be levied for admittance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
All around the world people have created a consumer society. It is noticeable due to the prices of branded items, while general purchasers do not understand that all this manufacture is impoverishing natural resources and many belief that government should encourage to consume more sensible. This essay will demonstrate why I think that the consumption trend is essential and governments should influence it.
The main reason for government to impact people is that manufacture needs some limited sources like gas and fuel to keep working. In other words, every created item which consumers can buy without any difficulties or inconvenience, equals to some stolen resources from the Earth. So, government is able to reverse the way people think with some propaganda of unselfish mindset and the consequences of such a lifestyle. For example, posters or advertisements in shopping malls or in public spaces can be powerful.
Another argument in favour of supporting of the sensible spendings is that it will reduce poverty. What I am saying is that development of the secondhand shops and other facilities for reusing is likely not only to cut the volumes of the consummation but also to support people who need and goverment is responsible for that. For instance, a used jacket can be sold for twice as cheap, but it does not impoverish natural resources for the second time.
In conclusion, I believe that there are practical reasons why the governments should encourage people to change the mindset of the unstoppable consumption, for example, supporting the lower layer of the society and saving limited resources of the Earth. However it is not a crime to by new things, purchasers should care more about the planet and its future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun belief seems to be countable; consider using: 'many beliefs'.
Suggestion: many beliefs
... is impoverishing natural resources and many belief that government should encourage to con...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... saving limited resources of the Earth. However it is not a crime to by new things, pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14788732394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91718498904 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4344361942 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207055680039 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709556987543 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453117062893 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118346242024 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317221450594 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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