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In some countries, more and more adults choose to continue living with their parents after they graduate and have found a job. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
More and more adults have decided to continue to live with their family,in some countries,after their graduation and have found jobs. This trend has many advantages that outweigh its disadvantages will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, people in this time have graduated and may have their own job, they can earn money to pay for their life and their parents. Parents who work all of their life to make child’ life better. And now it is time for them to relax and improve both physical health and mental health. Secondly, some parents have bad health because of their age. They may not have enough health to work themself. Children may find it hard to take care of their parents. Some parents always have a mind set that they don’t need children's money, therefore they may have some difficulties. Finally, when living with parents, people do not have to think about housing and housework. For example, a person who lives with family can focus on their work more than a person who lives alone, because their mom and dad may help them with some housework.
However, this trend still has some disadvantages. Living with parents can be problematic when people get married, especially when the person is a man, it may have some conflict between mother and daughter in law and the family atmosphere is so bleak.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages, the trend of choosing to continue living with the parents of more and more people after they graduate and have a job has many advantages that outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , after
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91496598639 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57095386685 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462585034014 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1940115698 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0463146285267 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158389691008 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420253281322 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0315816302573 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463751541194 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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