Today, selecting courses after 12 grade is a challenging task for students worldwide. The present day and time, pupil enrolling in other streams instead of science subjects. This essay will analyze the reasons why spending time to memorize concepts demotivate students and how it effects technology development.
To begin with, one of the most important factor is that Science is a time-consuming subject. Because of highly complex concepts which mentors need to memorize. As a result, number of hours are crucial in order to grasp the knowledge about that concept. Therefore, unable to participate in extracurricular activities. A survey was conducted by the Punjab University in 2022 and concluded that a large proportion of disciple enrolled in Arts rather than Science so that they can participate in other co-curricular activities over there. Therefore, students avoid these subjects during tertiary education.
Even though by enrolling in other sectors; for example, Business students contribute in banks. Still, technology advancement is affected due to this trend. Morgan for instance, was the scientist that concluded that genes transfer from parents to their offsprings. If pupil loose interest in Science field advancement in technology gets affected as maybe we will not get another scientist in the future. Hence, less interest in such courses leads to less discoveries in the future.
To sum up, avoiding other tasks in student life and give more emphasis on grasping facts and concepts decrease interest of students, which moreover, leads to create obstacles in new researches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51219512195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9295041977 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8202284295 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140234230333 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421032379517 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453867169617 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782415066558 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444011745885 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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