In this modernization era, trend to move from rural areas to urban areas become famous. Although some people believe that spending life in cities is more beneficial as compared to countryside. This essay will discuss why cities plays a crucial role to achieve success in all sectors of life despite environment of villages has great impact on human health.
Ecosystem outside cities is noise free and less polluted. Since people prefer to travel through public transport in those areas, releasing harmful gases from those vehicles affect habitat in lesser amount. A survey was conducted in 2021 that a large proportion of individuals in India give more emphasis on living outside of cities in order to live better and disease free life. Whereas people living in rural areas also suffer from respiratory disease but at lower risk.
No doubt huge amount of cars running everyday on the roads in cities as compare to villages which are responsible for serious issues such as health problems. Because of easy access to shopping, groceries and health facilities encourage people to opt cities life. Even if a shopping market is also available in rural areas but people can compare prices and they have huge variety and options to buy products due to which they select cities life over rural life.
In conclusion, neither countryside nor the city is a perfect place for living but cities provide great assistance to society in order to health services and fulfill their other necessities on time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ral areas to urban areas become famous. Although some people believe that spending life ...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...o buy products due to which they select cities life over rural life. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07287449393 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46584297615 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3493327787 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205461308406 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741265242582 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635649627159 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117703730979 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219056032242 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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