As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are various arguments about the responsibilities of nowadays corporations. Personally, I concur that besides making revenue, businesses should also take social problems into consideration.
To begin with, companies earning profit plays a tremendously important role in any nation. First of all, thanks to a large amount of income, the government could receive a relative tax from firms, which is then used for building facilities such as communal hospitals, scholastic areas, playgrounds, etc. as well as providing sufficient social security. If the economic underminers of a nation fail to generate wealthiness, leading to the lacking tax, the living standard of its citizens would be degraded. Secondly, a corporation that could make much money is likely to expand its organization, therefore creates considerable job vacancies for the workers. The larger the scale of a business is, the more employees it needs to operate. For example, Vin Group has successfully entered the market of the automobile after the era of Vimpearland, giving a lot of work opportunities for the unemployed.
Next, businesses need to care about social issues for the sake of sustainable development. Firstly, environmental protection could not be ignored when an individual starts to make business. Companies have a responsibility to control all the poisonous sewage it pours into the rivers, or to minimize the exhaust fumes its production process produces so as to hinder the environmental degradation. Without the care about the environment, a company should be abandoned from running by the authority. Additionally, there remain poor people who need support from firms as they could not manage to make a subsistence. A company can help the miserable by doing charity or giving them free lunch, which not only makes their lives brighter but also brings about more trust in the eyes of the public. The fact that ABA brand has given out millions of VND to the poverty in Vinh Long province is an example of this.
In conclusion, what today’s world necessitates from businesses has raised questions among individuals. I believe that a company has to take action to make a better society beside the priority of chasing economic benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3342776204 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10321033321 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643059490085 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5739756968 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.611111111 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186988606042 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525830739045 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497920381223 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116392024638 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428374794322 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.