An increasing number of city residents want to relocate to the countryside to live. In comparison, many people in rural want to live in the city. It's an intriguing trend in today's society.
Let's consider the cause of this occurrence.
The majority of city residents think that the pace of the capital is accelerating. The city is expanding, and with it, some new problems. The broader populace is very concerned. If they want to thrive in the city, they must put in a lot of work. Every day, they work long hours. Their minds are also exhausted. The rural setting is ideal for them to relax both physically and mentally. They will spend their time here doing what they love, such as sketching the scenery.
There are a growing number of crimes in the city nowadays. They cannot safeguard everyone. Humans live in continuous fear. And people's quality of life will fall. Many people now think that society is apathetic toward one another. As a consequence, our minds grow tired. As a result, city residents yearn for a rural lifestyle.
Those who reside in rural regions, on the other hand, think that the city provides numerous opportunities. Furthermore, the city provides first-rate services, schooling, and healthcare. There aren't many of them in the woods. As a result, rural people want an urban lifestyle for themselves as well as their children and grandchildren. They think that if they stay in the city, their future will be brilliant and sparkling.
I'll reside in the city until I'm old. In the city, I face numerous challenges, which I desire to recognize.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ople in rural want to live in the city. Its an intriguing trend in todays society. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...an intriguing trend in todays society. Lets consider the cause of this occurrence. ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anding, and with it, some new problems. The broader populace is very concerned. If ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...vices, schooling, and healthcare. There arent many of them in the woods. As a result,...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...uture will be brilliant and sparkling. Ill reside in the city until Im old. In the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...parkling. Ill reside in the city until Im old. In the city, I face numerous chall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86940298507 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70899377054 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1325291597 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.1923076923 106.682146367 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.3076923077 20.7667163134 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25436742325 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644564534719 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805606340381 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12475923154 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977953689979 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 50.2224549098 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.49 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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