The chart illustrates average CO2 emissions per person in four European countries between 1975 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the average amount of carbon dioxide per capita in four different European nations over the period of 40 years from 1975.
From the initial impression,the lowest CO2 emission output was recorded by Greece , while the figure for France takes the lead throughout the time. It is also considerable that both Greece and Spain increased their CO2 emission generated , in contrast, there was opposite trend pattern in the amount of co2 emissions in France and Norway.
In 1975, French discharged roughly 12 metric tons of CO2 and that is the highest among 4 countries .Following the second place was Norway with a pretty lower number of 8 metric tons , which is double that of Spain. Besides , Greece had the least CO2 emissions amount of around 1.5 metric tons.
40 year laters , there was a gradual fall of about 3 metric tons in Frech’s co2 emissions . However, France contributed the most number of co2 emissions throughout the period of 40 years. In terms of Norway , its amount of co2 emissions went down significantly to uder 6 metric tons after climbing up and reach the peak at 10 in 1985.
Unlike those two countries, the production of co2 emissions in Greece had a remarkable growth to touch the highest point at around 6 metric tons in 2015. Likewise, Spain kept releasing the gas until its co2 emissions increased to nearly 8 at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... from 1975. From the initial impression,the lowest CO2 emission output was recorded...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...2 emission output was recorded by Greece , while the figure for France takes the l...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n increased their CO2 emission generated , in contrast, there was opposite trend p...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd that is the highest among 4 countries .Following the second place was Norway wi...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Following
... that is the highest among 4 countries .Following the second place was Norway with a pret...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h a pretty lower number of 8 metric tons , which is double that of Spain. Besides ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., which is double that of Spain. Besides , Greece had the least CO2 emissions amou...
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...round 1.5 metric tons. 40 year laters , there was a gradual fall of about 3 met...
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Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t 3 metric tons in Frech’s co2 emissions . However, France contributed the most nu...
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Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hout the period of 40 years. In terms of Norway , its amount of co2 emissions wen...
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Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... period of 40 years. In terms of Norway , its amount of co2 emissions went down s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, likewise, second, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57671629963 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4338026254 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170873578532 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781744444433 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229185538601 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103753478675 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157655704629 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... from 1975. From the initial impression,the lowest CO2 emission output was recorded...
^^^^
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...2 emission output was recorded by Greece , while the figure for France takes the l...
^^
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n increased their CO2 emission generated , in contrast, there was opposite trend p...
^^
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd that is the highest among 4 countries .Following the second place was Norway wi...
^^
Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Following
... that is the highest among 4 countries .Following the second place was Norway with a pret...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h a pretty lower number of 8 metric tons , which is double that of Spain. Besides ...
^^
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., which is double that of Spain. Besides , Greece had the least CO2 emissions amou...
^^
Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...round 1.5 metric tons. 40 year laters , there was a gradual fall of about 3 met...
^^
Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t 3 metric tons in Frech’s co2 emissions . However, France contributed the most nu...
^^
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hout the period of 40 years. In terms of Norway , its amount of co2 emissions wen...
^^
Line 6, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... period of 40 years. In terms of Norway , its amount of co2 emissions went down s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, likewise, second, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57671629963 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4338026254 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170873578532 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781744444433 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229185538601 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103753478675 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157655704629 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.