The picture illustrates the process of reclycing the stormwater in a city in Australia.
Overall, it is readily apparent that process involves five main stepds, which begins when the rainwater is collected by a drainage system, are followed by various futher treatment steps, and ends when the treated water is delivered into accommodation for domestic consumption.
Looking the diagram for greater detail, the intitial stage of the processs involves the rainwater falling on the roofs is collected by a series of drains, which flow into a water recyling plant. At this plant, the rainwater undergoes four futher purification steps. Largest wastes including plastic or other rubbish are firstly removed, and small particles are then discarded from the water. Bacteria and viruses are subsequently eliminated, followed by the disposal of tiny molecules and salt.
In the next stage, the puried water is transported through a pipe system into the first treatment tank where chlorine is added at a concentrate level of 4 mg/l for futher purification. After being stored in the second reservoir, the clean water is ready for being distributed via a pipe into houses for household consumption on sunny days.
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 73
- Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier while others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 2010 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Largest'.
Suggestion: The Largest
...dergoes four futher purification steps. Largest wastes including plastic or other rubbi...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he disposal of tiny molecules and salt. In the next stage, the puried water is t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32460732984 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83465187045 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633507853403 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5157460792 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.125 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0369643035348 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02302564888 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480977443493 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421418205853 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606023371123 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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