Throughout the history, education has been excellently serving its purpose of bringing knowledge and enlightenment to humans, with teachers as its core light guiders. That being said, the vital importance of teachers seems to gradually decrease as time passes. Based on my experience in my country, teaching profession is currently not as appreciated as it was before.
It is understandable why educators used to be regarded so highly, on the same line with soldiers and doctors, considering the poor living conditions then. In the past, when wars were exploding everywhere on the globe, more concerns were placed on sustaining life rather than gaining knowledge. One fact that can be observed in many history books is that those who attended schools or classes were mostly born in either royal or aristocratic families. Education then appeared like a luxury that not anyone could afford. As a result, teachers, no matter where they were doing the job, were always considered wise scholars who were respected and valued by both ordinary residents and prominent members of the court.
On the other hand, there are a myriad of signs that indicate teaching is no longer receiving the appreciation and respect it deserves as an important profession. This displays first in the amount of income teachers all over the world gain each year. Compared to other core professions of any nation, such as doctors and soldiers, educators' earnings are always in much lower numbers. Although there has been a shortage of teachers in recent years, only a little amount of money was added to their salary, meaning there is not enough respect and recognition paid to this hard job. Moreover, as education has become more available to most citizens of the world and even free in some countries, teachers are seemed to be taken for granted these days. Some students and their parents show them little respect, not to mention gratitude, which is completely opposite to their ancestors’ position.
As the world has changed drastically over the past few decades, society inevitably goes through a big shift in its own attitude to educators. The profession that was once gracefully appreciated now remains an ordinary job where teachers are supposed to serve their functions and receive minimum wages.
- TOEFL T P O 09 Integrated Writing Task 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- should students wake up early in the morning ar not tpo 59 70
- TPO57 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone 73
- TPO 54 Integrated Writing Salinity in Salton Sea 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ourt. On the other hand, there are a myriad of signs that indicate teaching is no l...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16711590296 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73110339536 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630727762803 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3456150038 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8125 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179820335239 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486367357575 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053926958785 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956045356715 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666502292062 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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