In our world today, many people need things to be done instantly for them because they believe that the era of technology has made it possible, and It is a positive development, in my opinion, so I will discuss further in the body paragraphs.
The main reason why individuals want things to be done immediately is because the invention of technology has made it a possibility. In other words, the invention of the internet helps companies carry out swift services such as delivery. Similarly, the mobile phone is an invention that has made it possible to get various informations across to second parties fast. Clearly, more and more people prefer things to be done instantly given that technology has made that instant service a reality.
On the other hand, having things done instantly even if it is impromptu is a good development, and I will explain them ahead. Firstly, when you call your customer care, they receive your information, and act on it very immediately. This solves the issue of going to your service provider physically. With the internet, secondly, students can do their assignments at home which was given to them in school. So, this has sorted out the issue of having to go to class to receive assignments. Therefore, it is indeed a positive development if tasks can be done instantly.
To conclude, individual people love to achieve a task or service instantly, and this is because they know that technology has made it achievable, so to this end, I can comfortably say that I believe its development is a positive one.
- Water is a natural resource that should always be free Governments should ban the sale of bottled water To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 73
- Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the values of books 56
- Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the values of books
- Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and include relevant examples 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discuss further in the body paragraphs. The main reason why individuals want thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87667386494 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2389790369 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328549883599 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106439136309 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845607716868 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175508719655 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550215386023 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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