Old age is a beautiful stage in life. As a person gets old, they require lots of care and attention. In Britain old people often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. In most cases the government has to pay for their care. In this easy I will talk about who I think should pay for the this care.
Aged people needs the support of both government and family. For instance, an old person today was working in the past and had taxes they paid, so as they age I think the government should as well pay for their care as their citizens. Meanwhile, it is also important that the family of these old people show them maximum love and care because that is what they need even thou they has nurses to look after them.
Most of these old people do not have families who can care for them like the nurses do, but they really need the care to live healthier and longer. Age age comes most people can't work so they do not earn salary anymore. At this point they need the government to pay for their care.
Conclusively,Living a healthy life style is something every individual should pay attention to. Because as a person gets older it is very essential to be mindful of your health, the type of activities you do and clean your surroundings. Old age comes with a lot of experiences that is why aged people require maximum care and attention.
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 56
- Physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Write a letter to your manager to tell him her about some company documents that you lost while travelling with them please sayWhat were the documents Where and when did you travel with them Suggest a solution for this situation 64
- Throughout the history people dream to build a perfect society while they haven t agreed how the ideal society would be like What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society How do people do to achieve an ideal society 61
- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es to look after them. In most cases the government has to pay for their care. In...
^^
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... government has to pay for their care. In this easy I will talk about who I think...
^^
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...l talk about who I think should pay for the this care. Aged people needs the support ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es they paid, so as they age I think the government should as well pay for their ...
^^
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e that is what they need even thou they has nurses to look after them. Most of ...
^^^
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hem. Most of these old people do not have families who can care for them like...
^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Age
... the care to live healthier and longer. Age age comes most people cant work so they do ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r and longer. Age age comes most people cant work so they do not earn salary anymore...
^^^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Living
... to pay for their care. Conclusively,Living a healthy life style is something every...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35521235521 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34750304813 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498069498069 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.201994599 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5714285714 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.591282870488 0.244688304435 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209109213068 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128114719376 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.392369448574 0.151304729494 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.189055770041 0.056905535591 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.