The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is believed by a number of students that the ministry should spend for the course fees for all of them who want to achieve a university degree. In my opinion, there are both sides of this. In this following essay, I will show my opinions and give reasons why they should and shouldn't.
There are numerous reasons why the government should pay the course fees for students. First of all, it can be like a scholarship that gives disadvantaged colleagues a chance to study at the university. Nowadays, the school tuition are extremely expensive and quite a lot of families are in poverty, it's hard for their child to get a degree. they need to sell their homes, their cars or even their lives to have abundance money in order to pay fees for their child. that's the reason why government should help them pay for the course fees. In addition, if they have a chance to study in the university and have a degree after that, they will be come successful and independent adults in the future. they can come back to support their families and help the authority paid the fees for youngsters in their country
Another argument against this is a trend that it will be made. they will all think that's the duty the government must do. they will be lazy, won't try hard their best and always depend on their families not themselves. Union might also profit a great deal of money or even higher budget than what they prepare for education. While it is a trend, a number of colleagues in the future will force the ministry to pay their tuition or discount for them.
To sum up, I believe that government should only pay half of the fees for disadvantages students or only propose few scholarships due to the fact in that situation, they will try hard to get it and it's more suitable. Don't merely depend on the ministry, we should insure thinking in which case it's necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55489614243 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45202629885 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495548961424 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4449633876 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288767314207 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107910348223 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10251486614 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17687538753 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05871009731 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.