Some people believe that children's leisure time activities must be educational otherwise they are waste of their time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowdays, life of yongster became not effective because nothing direction from the parents. Majority of parents considered that youngster should be guzzle to do positive activities such as increasing ability in education. I totally agree with this notion and think that youngster must be controlled by their parrents to filling spare time.
First of all, education activities will able to sharpen their ability for think critically and analytically. In other words, in a long life, learning that their get at home when they filling spare time with positive activities will help them to determine their future. Capacity of their ability will stand in different level than their friends. For instance, curently, many games devised by professional in this field, they made online games with different feature and with distinct model, as a result their intellectual became honed such as onet game. Thus, youngster deprive their time with education and when mature they will think if a lot of positive impact that they gather in childhood life.
Secondly, sometimes youngster feel bored with their activities, so, the parrents have important role to arouse their spirit. Moreover, parents must have unique way to make them not boring for study. Many methods that can used by parrents to assist youngster upgrade their energy. For example, any games with the name is sudoku and jigsaw, this games have exaggerate to developing ability in numeracy and solve problems. Ultimately, they spend more time to play this game and as a result their brain will fill with education.
To conclude, parents have responsible to pay attention for youngster growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'guzzled'?
Suggestion: guzzled
...nts considered that youngster should be guzzle to do positive activities such as incre...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'exaggerated'.
Suggestion: exaggerated
...e is sudoku and jigsaw, this games have exaggerate to developing ability in numeracy and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25855513308 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55538202662 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8817747149 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251059134535 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935876150035 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741904171761 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141851084421 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860084694636 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.