The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bart chart creates inhabitants of USA comsuming junk food spot around 2003 until 2013.
Overall, average of people stay in USA leisure the longest time to eating in fast food restaurant at once a week. The situation contrast by people of never types to ate in some place. Whereas, sometimes in a few time a year occured stabil in amount of consumption.
In 2013 of once a week side, people could had expenditure of money for bought some food around 25% and 30% and the data shows this amount was lowest than 2003 and 2006, whiches the rate indicates above 30% respectively. Moreover, the rate was opposed to people in 2013, in category of once or twice a month for get nourishment from several food in eatery. The percentage prove a higher quantity that is between 30% and 35%, this data was high level than another years in the same categories.
On the other hand, in types of everyday and never for inhabitants ate fast food has slightly total of consumed and the count was under 5%. However, in 2003 of never people eating at junk food inn reach 5%, while in another years all of cost was around 0%-5%.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le of never types to ate in some place. Whereas, sometimes in a few time a year occured...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... in some place. Whereas, sometimes in a few time a year occured stabil in amount of cons...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... 2013 of once a week side, people could had expenditure of money for bought some fo...
^^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some food'.
Suggestion: some food
... twice a month for get nourishment from several food in eatery. The percentage prove a highe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
... several food in eatery. The percentage prove a higher quantity that is between 30% a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...gories. On the other hand, in types of everyday and never for inhabitants ate fast food...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53731343284 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35445888616 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.753243387 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296455261002 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116182177757 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688259528432 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179299008332 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336205571347 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le of never types to ate in some place. Whereas, sometimes in a few time a year occured...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... in some place. Whereas, sometimes in a few time a year occured stabil in amount of cons...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... 2013 of once a week side, people could had expenditure of money for bought some fo...
^^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some food'.
Suggestion: some food
... twice a month for get nourishment from several food in eatery. The percentage prove a highe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
... several food in eatery. The percentage prove a higher quantity that is between 30% a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...gories. On the other hand, in types of everyday and never for inhabitants ate fast food...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53731343284 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35445888616 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.753243387 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296455261002 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116182177757 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688259528432 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179299008332 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336205571347 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.