When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
With constant development in technological innovations and constant changes in lifestyle of society, the question of whether the efforts to maintain the traditional style of living raises an interesting debate. I believe that older generations created a healthy lifestyle, mainly due to their past experiences that should carry forward for the next generations.
First of all, with the development of science and automation, humans adopted a mechanical living and fast-food habits, there by neglecting the traditional approach for wellbeing. For instance, ancient Indian science explains the use o...
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all kinds of efforts be made to preserve the traditions.
all kinds of efforts should be made to preserve the traditions.
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