The enhancement of technology improves humans' lives and lifestyle exponentially. Nowadays, every country implements modern technology for their developments, which leads to die out some traditional skulls and ways of lives. There is a controversial debate about preserving traditional skills and culture. Some people believe that there are no need to preserve traditional skills and culture, while i strongly feel the opposite. I think traditional works and culture represent nation's identities which should be reserved.
Firstly, traditional skills means countries cultures and histories. which is significantly important for every nation. If any country loose their traditional works and cultures, their future generation would have lack of knowledge about their own's history and culture. In addition, if countries fail to preserve their traditional skills, they might loose their nations' identities. For instance, Jamdani sharees are manly Bangladeshi traditional cloths, which has geographical patent. However, to bearing this history and identity, Bangladesh need to preserve this skills. Moreover, traditional foods are always cooked in it's own ways. However, In modern era, grinders and ovens are commonly used for cooking. Hence, people always avoid technology for cooking nation's traditional foods to ensure it's original taste and appeal.
Technology's developments are blessing for humans' lives, which enrich countries economy and people's lifestyle. For instance, due to advancement of agricultural equipment, people able to produce more crops in cheap. In addition, in garment's business, nowadays, production has increased drastically in cheap price, which has significant impact on nation's economy.
In conclusion, modern technology and it's improvements are playing vital role to countries dramatic developments. However, traditional skills and culture still imperative for their own identity and it should be reserve in proper ways.
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. 73
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that heard everywhere nowadays? 61
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." - rewrite 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ditional skills and culture. Some people believe that there are no need to preser...
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...means countries cultures and histories. which is significantly important for every na...
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...ortant for every nation. If any country loose their traditional works and cultures, t...
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...ve their traditional skills, they might loose their nations identities. For instance,...
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...d identity, Bangladesh need to preserve this skills. Moreover, traditional foods are...
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... price, which has significant impact on nations economy. In conclusion, modern tech...
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...for their own identity and it should be reserve in proper ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02877697842 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98795089072 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.710613785 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2105263158 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138952749553 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049163277454 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390310533918 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886255614718 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371703680302 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.1 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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