Hi Sarah,
I hope all is well and good. I received your letter yesterday stating the noise issue from our home and I want to apologise to you for it.
Well, I and my husband were out of town for a seminar in London for about a week. During this time Riya organised a party at our home without informing us. The music blaring from the speakers would have caused you many problems and I am sorry for that once again.
I understand that we live in a society and need to be much more responsible and look out for others peace also. I can assure you that something like this will not happen again and as for Riya, she is grounded for another whole month. She will not repeat such a mistake in future again. Even she will be coming to your house tomorrow to say how sorry she is and promise you that she will not commit such a thing next time.
I hope you forgive her and me and I would like to propose a dinner next weekend to make it up to you. Do let me know what you think?
See you soon,
Nina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sponsible and look out for others peace also. I can assure you that something like t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10606060606 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99867954573 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5532336311 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.75 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262674290381 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853993086335 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084625374968 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155272535742 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075514491566 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.