The charts below give information about the diet and general health of two groups of students.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The charts and the graph show a comparison of two different students group in relation to their daily food intake and their health aspects. Overall, there seems to be a direct link between a better life quality and healthier diets. Whereas students in Group A who consume healthier food combinations show better attendance in class, those in Group B show a greater rate of absenteeism.
The two pie charts explain the similarities and differences with regards to the two students’ group diets. In both Group A and B, about a third of the food students eat consists of carbohydrate such as cereal...
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