It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extend due to the availability of fast food.
Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed ?
The consumption of junk foods have increased signifiantly over past few decades due to easily available fast food chains and junk food stores on the streets, which resulted into people becoming obese day by day. Whether authorities impose tax on fast foods to discourage people from eating fast food or not is a debatable matter. I deem that it is an effective solution to stop people eating unhealthy foods.
First and foremost, the major reason behind the fast-food consumtion is that it is extremely cheaper than the healthy meals. A vegetable salad with cottage cheese or meat, for example, is twise or thrise more expensive while comparig to junk food such as burger. Ultimately, people choose reay-to-eat foods from the market or purchase junk foods directly from fast food chains to save money. In my opinion, the cost of healthy food should be less and that can be achieved by imposing heavy tax on fast food products,consequently, people will change their eating habits and that will lead to a healthier society.
Another way to reduce the consumption of fast food is to restricting the number of junk food stores in a perticular city or area, by which people will have less options to purchase unhealthy foods. Moreover, healthy foodchains should be promoted by government and made tax-free, so they can avail healthy food at competitive rates for the people.
In recapitulation, it is clearly visible that the policy to impose heavy tax on junk foods can be a game changer to resolve the burning issue of increased number of overweighted people. At the same time, I reckon, governments should not neglect the importance of making healthier food affordable for common people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consequently
...imposing heavy tax on fast food products,consequently, people will change their eating habits...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun options is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, i reckon, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03914590747 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82777780259 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5996158753 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419915368982 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177660464399 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976371635551 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27516105651 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708910586504 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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