The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart gives us information about the primary reasons of worldwide land degradation. The table shows the impact of that degradation on three regions of the world. Both of these are the data during the 1990s.
According to the data on pie chart, the major reason of worldwide degradation is over-grazing by 35%. The second cause of degradation is followed by deforestation on 30% and over-cultivation on 28%. The last is followed by other reasons by 7%.
The data on pie chart can be used to explain the data in the table about the causes of land degradation in some region around the world such as in North America, Europe and Oceania. There are variety reasons of degradation in different regions. In the North America the major reason of degradation is over-cultivation by 33%, in other hand in Europe the major reason of degradation is deforestation by 9.8%, otherwise in Oceania the main reason is over-grazing by 11.3%.
In sum up, we can see from the pie chart that the major reason of agricultural land becoming less productive is caused by over-grazing as the highest percent around the three other reasons. The table provides data about the region having most degraded land is Europe by 23%.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2017-12-04 | sherin rijo | 73 | view |
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 70
- There are many different types of music in the world today What do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays 58
- Some organization believe that their employees should dress smartly Others value quality of work above appearance Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or 76
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth with poorer nations by providing them with things such as food and education? Or is this the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens? 70
flaws:
1. More content wanted for the table.
2. No. of Different Words: 89 100
----------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 207 200
No. of Characters: 974 1000
No. of Different Words: 89 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.94 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.276 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.182 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.413 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.621 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4