In our world today, immigration has a major impact on our societies. However, I will discuss the main reasons individual people migrate, and the consequences immigration can lead to.
First and foremost, the main reason people migrate to other countries is because they want to live a better life. The reason is that they see migrating to first-world countries as a dream come true. Statistics shows, for instance, that majority of the people from Nigeria will prefer to migrate to a country like Canada to live their dreams. Secondly, most people, especially parents, want to give their kids the best life, and migration to certain countries can make that possible. Thus, when individuals take part in immigration, it will enable them live the life they have always dreamt of.
On the contrary, forgetting one's original culture can be a consequence caused by immigration. Cultures can easily be forgotten given that we have migrated to another country. Statistics shows that people who left their country for other countries forget their indigenous language at some point. In addition, if a person migrates to a different country, they will face challenges with respect to the weather conditions of that country. A man from Ghana, for example, will have difficulties adapting to the snow in the United States of America. Therefore, as long as we partake in immigration, there must always be consequences that it will lead to.
In conclusion, there are various reasons people will want to migrate to other countries, yet this decision will also lead to some consequences.
Reasons for immigration is to have a better life, and also give your kids the best life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12408759124 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77454847483 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2793661617 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205103313188 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786258535532 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799892499405 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148192365328 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115534156391 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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