the future all the cars buses will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantage of drivless vehicles out weigh the disadvantages (790293)
A significant change has occurred in the field of transportation due to technology .There is also probability that in future the vehicles that would on roads would be driverless which could have both positive and negative consequences. I agree that this trend may be beneficial for country and its citizens although it has a handful of disadvantages.
At the onset, the predominant benefit of driverless vehicle is the obedience of traffic rules. To be precise, automated vehicles would be maintained in such a way they would follow all the traffic rules such as not crossing traffic lights, appropriate speed limit according to sign boards and so on. Hence, less possibility would have been found related to accidents. To exemplify, 60% of accidents in India occurred due to over speed. Moreover automatic vehicles may also beneficial for public as the door must be opened and closed according to the system indulged in it .Thus, there would be less chances that the passengers would get injuries while boarding in and out of the vehicles.
On the other hand it has fue disadvantages as it would increase the number of unemployed people in the society as the drivers will lose their jobs due to latest technology which would provide catastrophic results. For instance, the unemployment would bring chaos in society due to the fact that unemployed drivers would involve themselves in anti social activities for earning their livelihood .Moreover , there may also be chances of fight among the passengers as everybody would try to stop the vehicles at various places which would be proved time consuming.
To conclude ,although driveless vehicles has few disadvantages yet its advantages can not be ignored as they are related with safety as well as obedience of traffic rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87903526564 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3863993925 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205667412908 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836229279347 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492444292012 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133168402803 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199734761565 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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