Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered that media has been attaching much important to negative news and emergent cases instead of disseminating positive news via the internet.Some people believe that this emphasize would affect to some people and community.Personally, I believe that the news should maintain a balance of both positive and negative stories.
On the one side, upsetting stories may have a detrimental impact on each individual and also community. If people watch totally negative news too much they would be scared and live full of panic , which may affect their daily lives. In addition, there is a variety range of movies or news that contain criminal scenes and dark contents can have a profound impact on youngsters. For example, children have a tendency to be more aggressive and behave rudely when they are informed too much of these negative source from social media, thus leading a unwholesome life.
On the other side, some people feel that, that there are some benefits of posting social problems on the media.First of all , the emergencies and negative information aired on television or the internet, the more people acknowledged about current negative issues and they can prevent these situations. Moreover,reporting many serious accidents is an effective way to raise inhabit's awareness about their safety.To illustrate, there is a wide range of news channels which demonstrate accidents such as car crashes ,hence make a contribute to promoting driver’s habits.
In conclusion, negative news and emergencies should be reduced by social media and I think that it would be more beneficial if they show good news and inspirational programmes. Because such kind of shows motivates people and encourage them to make an effort hardly to achieve their goals.
Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is considered that media has been attaching much important to negative news and emergent cases instead of disseminating positive news via the internet.Some people believe that this emphasize would affect to some people and community.Personally, I believe that the news should maintain a balance of both positive and negative stories.
On the one side, upsetting stories may have a detrimental impact on each individual and also community. If people watch totally negative news too much they would be scared and live full of panic , which may affect their daily lives. In addition, there is a variety range of movies or news that contain criminal scenes and dark contents can have a profound impact on youngsters. For example, children have a tendency to be more aggressive and behave rudely when they are informed too much of these negative source from social media, thus leading a unwholesome life.
On the other side, some people feel that, that there are some benefits of posting social problems on the media.First of all , the emergencies and negative information aired on television or the internet, the more people acknowledged about current negative issues and they can prevent these situations. Moreover,reporting many serious accidents is an effective way to raise inhabit's awareness about their safety.To illustrate, there is a wide range of news channels which demonstrate accidents such as car crashes ,hence make a contribute to promoting driver’s habits.
In conclusion, negative news and emergencies should be reduced by social media and I think that it would be more beneficial if they show good news and inspirational programmes. Because such kind of shows motivates people and encourage them to make an effort hardly to achieve their goals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...s harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree? ...
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...minating positive news via the internet.Some people believe that this emphasize woul...
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Suggestion: Personally
...uld affect to some people and community.Personally, I believe that the news should maintai...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e of both positive and negative stories. On the one side, upsetting stories may h...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...y would be scared and live full of panic , which may affect their daily lives. In ...
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Line 6, column 546, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... source from social media, thus leading a unwholesome life. On the other side...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...edia, thus leading a unwholesome life. On the other side, some people feel that...
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...of posting social problems on the media.First of all , the emergencies and negative i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ocial problems on the media.First of all , the emergencies and negative informatio...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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...y can prevent these situations. Moreover,reporting many serious accidents is an effective ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...e inhabits awareness about their safety.To illustrate, there is a wide range of ne...
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Line 8, column 513, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emonstrate accidents such as car crashes ,hence make a contribute to promoting dri...
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Line 8, column 526, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cidents such as car crashes ,hence make a contribute to promoting driver’s habits. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30599369085 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02345856222 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.081890836 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.2 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292336380552 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133598378382 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153435524056 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218137652219 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240724135216 0.056905535591 423% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...s harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree? ...
^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...minating positive news via the internet.Some people believe that this emphasize woul...
^^^^
Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personally
...uld affect to some people and community.Personally, I believe that the news should maintai...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of both positive and negative stories. On the one side, upsetting stories may h...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y would be scared and live full of panic , which may affect their daily lives. In ...
^^
Line 6, column 546, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... source from social media, thus leading a unwholesome life. On the other side...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edia, thus leading a unwholesome life. On the other side, some people feel that...
^^^
Line 8, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...of posting social problems on the media.First of all , the emergencies and negative i...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ocial problems on the media.First of all , the emergencies and negative informatio...
^^
Line 8, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reporting
...y can prevent these situations. Moreover,reporting many serious accidents is an effective ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...e inhabits awareness about their safety.To illustrate, there is a wide range of ne...
^^
Line 8, column 513, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...emonstrate accidents such as car crashes ,hence make a contribute to promoting dri...
^^
Line 8, column 526, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cidents such as car crashes ,hence make a contribute to promoting driver’s habits. In con...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30599369085 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02345856222 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567823343849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.081890836 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.2 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292336380552 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133598378382 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153435524056 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218137652219 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240724135216 0.056905535591 423% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.