The graph below shows the percentage of female workers and workers aged 50 or above in the UK workforce.
The information in regard to the ratio of ladies staff as well as females of 50 age group or above in london workforce,is illustrated by the line graph.The data is calibrated in percentum.
Now,looking at the details,the average of ladies workers was 37% in 1971.Meanwhile from year 1971 untill 1980,there was an significant increase in women workers with 40% and no worker above 50 was again seen in this period.In regard to this,the ratio of female staff upsurge with 42% In next ten years.Contrastly,21% Workers of above 50 was there in year 1990.
Probing ahead,with remaining information,in years 1990 to 2000,the average of female staff was 43% whilst staff above 50 had 25% workers respectively.Additionally,the ratio of ladies staff was remained same untill next ten years with 54%.Noticeably,the average of workers above 50 culminated with 29% in years 2000to 2010.Lastly,the ratio of workers holds the dominant place with 47% till year 2019 whilst the percentum of workers above 50 skyrocketedin year 2019 with 32%
Overall,it is patently obvious that ladies workers outrace the workers above 50.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, well, while, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63764182081 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 22.4926829268 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.341832724 43.030603864 349% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 313.333333333 112.824112599 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6666666667 22.9334400587 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.3333333333 5.23603664747 350% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300473683242 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218574247157 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310370428939 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225722278961 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481693225832 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.2329268293 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 61.2550243902 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.3012195122 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.9970731707 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.0658536585 226% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.