Cities are often seen as the place which brings a lot of benefits for people but they also have some drawbacks. I think governments had better improve the quality of life instead of advising citizens to migrate to other regions.
The first problem for people living in large cities today is facing many types of pollution, especially air pollution. Almost the air has bad quality at rush hour, so it makes it difficult for people who are working and studying. Next, the cost of living in urban areas is higher than in rural areas or towns. Inhabitants of cities have to waste money on housing, cooking, transport, etc. Another issue is cities have high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. That's the reason why citizens often get many diseases about spirit.
Governments can tackle these problems instead encourage people to move to smaller regional towns by the following step. Firstly, they should issue order that use alternative vehicles such as bikes, electric cars, buses,.... to reduce carbon dioxide. Secondly, politicians had better limit the inflationary that boost price unusually in the market and facilitate people in the urban areas to have work. A final option would be to spend money on security to save inhabitants, in addition, they also should increase fines for criminals.
In conclusion, there are various steps for governments to implement to enhance the quality of life for all city residents so that they have not to encourage people to migrate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06477732794 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54031081546 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635627530364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6046889826 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319392069398 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940375783759 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118829202388 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171758842681 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048016318849 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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