Given are the pie chart and the table which illustrate the factors of worldwide land degradation and the percentages of land degraded by different reasons in three regions: North America, Europe and Oceania during the 1990s.
Overall, the over-gazing by cattle was responsible for the worldwide land degradation. Comparing in three regions, Europe was the highest land degraded region, while Oceania was the lowest one in this record.
The first thing to mention is the main factor of worldwide land degradation in 1990s was over-gazing by animals. 35% of total less productivity of land was taken part in over-gazing, which was five times higher than other factors. The deforestation and over-cultivation were also major reasons of land degradation which contributed to 30% and 28%, respectively.
Secondly, the reasons of less productivity of agriculture land in three regions contributed to deforestation, over-gazing and over-cultivation. In Europe, the percentage of total land degraded was 23%, which was higher than Oceania and North America by 10% and 18%, respectively. In detail, the major causes were different in three regions as the deforestation was happened in Europe with 9.8%, the over-gazing was responsible in Oceania with 11.3% and the over-cultivation was the dominant reason in North America with 3.3%.
To sum up, two main reasons of using land was less productive in worldwide were over-grazing and deforestation, and the continent that had the most land degraded was Europe from deforestation.
- When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details. 73
- Many people spend a lot of money on clothes haircuts and beauty products to enhance their appearance Some people think that it is a good way to spend money while others think that there is a better way to spend it Discuss both views and give your opinion 90
- The pie charts below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s (rewrite2) 70
- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 63
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings, Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion. 70
Europe was the highest land degraded region,
Europe was the most degraded region,
The first thing to mention is the main factor of worldwide land degradation in 1990s was over-gazing by animals.
The first thing to mention is that the main factor of worldwide land degradation in 1990s was over-gazing by animals.
were also major reasons of land degradation
were also the major reasons of land degradation
two main reasons of using land was less productive in worldwide were over-grazing and deforestation
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 236 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
------------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 236 200
No. of Characters: 1244 1000
No. of Different Words: 100 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.919 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.271 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.205 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.309 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.485 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.73 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4