The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many commentators say that the most vital mission of science should be to improve life quality for humanity. I partially agree with this idea and will discuss both sides below.
I believe that one of the most important thing for science is to help people's lives because people develope science for their demands in life. To elucidate, people create electric devices for the convinience of working and living. In addition, science should not only improve people's lives but also improve the society. As a consequence, the society will develope rapidly and considerably.
Despite the strength of the arguments above, I have reservations that improving people's lives is the most important aim of science because science pay more focus on improving the environment than people's live. To extent, the environment has been destroyed by people day by day, if people do not use science to improve the quality of the environment, in someday the humanity will be extinct. For example, according to a recent Harvard study, it shows that 80 percent of environmentalist agree to use science into helping the environment. As a result, in the near future, the air quality will be better, there will be less emmission gas and the atmosphere will be cleaner. In addition, people's health will be improve and people will have a happy life.
In conclusion, I agree that science should be use to improve people's lives because it is the reason why people spend a lot of money and studies to develope it. Nevertheless, science should also help the environment because with the power of science, it will help to save the environment and also save the humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98540145985 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75487255958 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478102189781 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5353355768 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401706629189 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152877570103 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949406438484 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256977967172 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327704545057 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.