Imagine you have one week to spend on a vacation in a city you've never been to before. Would you prefer to spend the week participating in scheduled activities such as going on guided tours of the city, or would you prefer to spend the week exploring the city on your own, with no scheduled activities?
If I had been in such a dilemma where I have to choose whether to spend my one week vacation in a new city alone or with the help of guided tours of the city, without any shadow of doubt I would decide to explore a new city on my own due to the following reasons.
The main reason of choosing to explore any new city by my own would be my nature of being a free bird who loves freedom and want to do things according to my own choice because in the case of guided tours, one has to be very restricted to be in a group and see only the places which are popular not the ones which are unexplored. Following the instructions and listening to the big lectures of the tour guides could be very boring and irritating to the person like me who is very relaxed and easy going and not the one who listen to others and do things according to the instructions given by somebody. Having said that, if I explore city by my own choice then I could feel free, more excited, and not to be in hurry to go from one place to another in rush by following tour guides and the tour groups. I can rather be slow, easy going and can travel accordingly. What is more, I can even search the places and visit which are interesting but yet unexplored by many people and there are a lot of such places in every city.
An another factor could be cost, it is needless to say that any tour guides working solely and any tour and travel agencies which provide such tour guides charge a hefty amount of money. And, this is very likely to be a problem for the traveler like me who always tries his best to save money while travelling due to the limited travelling budget.
However, some people might think that there is ease by hiring tour guides to find places easily and for any other things. In contrast, if we are new to place and so not know anything about it we might miss the real fun and essence of the places we will visit alone because tour guides explains the story behind the significance of any historical and religious place. Therefore, tour guided trips are better.
In conclusion, it is evident that travelling alone and exploring any places on one's own could be very nice in terms of making one feel free, exciting and saving money too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: A factor; Another factor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27423167849 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25573046886 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8210700248 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153256616095 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634014284187 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671581650596 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983835431272 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834478008972 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 58.1214874552 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.08 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 10.002688172 255% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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