The most important aim of science is should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In this day and age, it is believed that the most fundamental purpose of science should be to enhance residents' living conditions. From my perspective, I agree with this statement and this essay will indicate the possible reasons.
To begin with, science is considered to facilitate human lives to become better in terms of medical treatment. It is a contributor to the development of medicine through technological and innovative machines, which provides more useful and academic information related to that disease. For instance, in the Covid pandemic, due to the invention of virus vaccines which were assisted by technological science, a large number of people got vaccinated and recovered from that acute and infectious disease. As a result, it plays a crucial role in the development of medicine.
In addition, not only is it indispensable in the medical system but it is also of the essence in people's daily life. It has assisted human lives through innovative and modernized machines. Take the steam locomotive as an example, since it was invented, local residents could commute to far-away locations without going on foot. Therefore, inhabitants could reach their location just in a short amount of time.
In conclusion, thanks to science, human daily life has become better and improved. Not only does it contribute to the revolution of medicine but it also contributes to people's daily life in other fields. From my perspective, individuals should not rely too much on science, they ought to try hard as much as possible to achieve their goals in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...were assisted by technological science, a large number of people got vaccinated and recovered fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15234375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94430468086 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0339735128 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121138240486 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395817473342 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549809577554 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722084491303 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507968896316 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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