Many parents send their children abroad to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the phenomenon.
Studying in abroad has become common due to high quality education and exposure. There are parents willing send their kids out side of their home country to pursue higher degree. However, it is sometimes argued that this could be a positive decision towards having better study opportunities, while other strongly disagrees that this is not a great idea to send pupils to a unknown world. This essay agrees that studying in abroad for topmost quality educational environment is new-normal. This article will discuss the advantages and disadvantages about the phenomenon.
We can not deny this fact that home country may not always promise one the best educational infrastructure. We often notice, certain choice of subjects or university setup like quality lab arrangement or rare reference book is not available in home country. Therefore, students tend to get admission in external colleges to avail the extra benefits of learning. For example, in India, there unavailability of rare choice of subjects, high-tech lab equipment or other relevant study materials in various university.
However, many disagrees and rigid in case of sending their teenagers to study in other geographical location. According to those people, student may experience a lot of ups and downs during the tenure of their degree courses as they are staying alone. Hence, this could be disadvantages as they may lose valuable study time. For instance, students in abroad are investing certain time on doing their personal stuff like cooking, grocery etcetera. Instead of that parents believe that student could have involved themselves into study.
It depends on personal decision to send the learners overseas to study to get top-notch education. Some people find it’s advantageous and other finds it wrong. Hence, in my opinion, if one can afford to send their kids away for a better life ahead, they must go ahead as this helps individuals to learn things by their own along with study.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ere are parents willing send their kids out side of their home country to pursue higher ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s is not a great idea to send pupils to a unknown world. This essay agrees that s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25949367089 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74747702943 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5534276298 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299323070573 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895827897338 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847399092422 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166210996711 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106926488878 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ere are parents willing send their kids out side of their home country to pursue higher ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s is not a great idea to send pupils to a unknown world. This essay agrees that s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25949367089 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74747702943 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5534276298 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299323070573 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895827897338 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847399092422 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166210996711 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106926488878 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.