The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents

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The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents.

Given in the stacked column charts is the illustration of the total time that children devote to their parents, which is recorded during weekdays and weekends.
Overall, what is striking from the charts is the tendency of children to spend most of their time with moms from Monday to Friday, and another identical trend was experienced by both dad and mom during weekends. Also, it is remarkable that children from 4 to 5 are likely to be with their dads more than other age brackets.
On weekdays, children choose to spend most of their time with moms rather than dads or both. To be more specific, of the total of around 9 hours, time with Mom accounts for more than half, specifically about 5 hours. Besides, dads use nearly the same time as both to be with their children, but it is slightly higher.
Another pattern is observed on weekends, which is the trade in the first and second places of the most time spent with, almost 6 hours is experienced by both mom and dad at each age group. Following this, time spent with moms declines to only 4 hours, and an even more dramatic pattern is recorded with dads.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5671641791 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35431170291 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5352855547 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288626268725 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15328554688 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564929589101 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190365677139 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563754431033 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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