Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Challenging tourism attraction for many people is the new thing being interesting to be visited. There are various places such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic making everyone plan extra preparation to go there. It can be positive thing when the visit is used as study agenda to understand something which is different. However, ordinary tourists sometimes do not realize about the dangerous area there which can threaten their life.
Visiting to some places which have difficult condition definitely gives challenge for people liking to dare themselves, especially studying about it is fun by them. They will obtain a situation where it is direct experience to face problem being provided there. For instance, researchers who study about deep sea have to dive to known about everything which is life and condition under the deep sea. The discovery after diving will bring a rare information, because there are not many people being able to visit dangerous area.
The problem for seeing challenging place is that controlling to safety of tourists sometimes become uncooperative because they want to get challenge then being unaware about high risk. For example, to dare themselves in order to get acknowledgment as courageous person, people dare take choice to hike mountain without enough preparation. Therefore, safety is the number one which has to consider before deciding to do something which have risk.
Dangerous area can be visited when everyone has important thing to be done such as researching and studying as they might reach the new thing. Nevertheless, tourists have to follow the rule to get safe way before going there to avoid danger which can damage them. They must also consider choosing the place based on condition and safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22261484099 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68783143313 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7133084411 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200339573516 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070292328255 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056147498866 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12705888486 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343256123676 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.