In the modern era, when the world has become a global village, tourists have also started new trends of visiting harsh areas like the Sahara desert or the North and South Poles. Touring such places has advantages as well as disadvantages elaborated in the following paragraphs.
Extreme weather locations are quite fascinating when watched on television channels like National Geographic and Discovery but there is another level of adventure when a person actually visits them. Exploration of such places lets a person see his strengths and weaknesses, as it is a common saying "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger". There are many books and documentaries containing survival techniques in difficult conditions but one actually learns them when experienced by having a trip. Consequently, when the tourists come back with plenty of pictures and videos to share on social media, their popularity boosts, turning their journey into a chance of profitable income.
There are a number of jeopardies and dangers involved, visiting a far off desert or an island covered with tonnes of ice. The adventurers would need a lot of planning and equipment that might cost them a fortune because tourist facilities are quite rare in these places. There is a greater chance of injury, accident and emergency. As these areas are less populated, so in case of any emergency, there is no help available. Many mountaineers have died of cold and storms while climbing the K-2 and Mount Everest. Places with uncommon environments might induce allergies and medical condition which may have not been diagnosed. There is no chance of careless behaviour as one can get severe burns in the desert or frostbite in snow.
The tourists who visit places like the Sahara Desert, K2, Mount Everest, Antarctica, Arctic etc do get a chance to enjoy nature at its extreme and get to learn about survival but there are life threatening dangers involved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15873015873 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80188181374 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9882970916 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239428420662 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666040178131 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574614539065 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151818679762 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504075170411 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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