Write an essay at least 180 words about the advantages of travelling. Give reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
In this day and age, going along with the development of transportation, travelling has been becoming a more and more popular activity. There are some advantages of travelling we will mention in this essay which are to enhance the knowledge and to achieve piece of mind.
First of all, travelers can enhance their knowledge effectively. They have chances to discover the place where they go to, of course, but it can also allow them to learn about a different civilization, stories throughout the history and even its contribution to the world. In addition, it provides a hand-on educational experience that they cannot be replicated in books or classrooms. As a result, travelers are able to take more experience and widen the knowledge on their own.
Secondly, people can achieve piece of mind throughout travelling. Nowadays, daily routines involve many people navigating in chase of their busy schedules. Therefore, they easily get stuck in stress and burnout which make them feel dissatisfied with their jobs. Thus, many people consider travelling as a cure. By travelling, thay can take a step back and think about things and people they miss. Subsequently, travellers get a better perspective on their own life. Moreover, travelling may let them live life for its own sake.
In short, according to the aforementioned advantages of travelling, people can surely take travelling without thinking. Therefore, I strongly agree that travelling is a beneficial activity for all of us.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in short, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26359832636 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01527074001 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9407527177 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968307966033 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361637662962 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292548856315 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674748730943 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199975234208 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in short, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26359832636 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01527074001 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9407527177 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8666666667 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968307966033 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361637662962 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292548856315 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674748730943 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199975234208 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.