When it comes to having a job, many people beve that their income play a mon crtical role compared their satisfaction. From my perspective, I partly disagree with this statement as doing a suitable and enjoyable job is as crucial as earning money
On the one hand, it is necessary to have a well-paid job nowadays. One of the major reason related to this is people need money to pay for their living cost. For example, having a stable wage would make life become more easy to live as you don't need to be worried about electricity bills, insurance or other payments. On the contrary, those who depend more on the enjoyment of the job may struggle to meet their demaands. Therefore, a high salary occupation is likely to help life become more comfortable to live
On the other hand, considering a career just based on the salary it offers would make people get loss of motivation and have problems with helath. As long as they continue to work, they might experience stress and depression. Nonetheless, earning a large amount of money monthly could enable people to over their needs, it could not be used to purchase both mental and physical healt. As a result, many people especially the young are dealing with pressure come from their careers every single day because of the lack of joy
In conclusion, although salary could benefit life, it is also vital to consider other aspects when deciding a job
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ke life become more easy to live as you dont need to be worried about electricity bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73577235772 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52217673925 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9555596063 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.444444444 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115625614826 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449381850407 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409226378533 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850881319546 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489420575746 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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