When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to the topic having a career, many people believe that their income play a more critical role than their satisfaction. From my perspective, I firmly support that doing a suitable and enjoyable job is more crucial as your jobs affect a lot to your health coupled with your quality of life.
On the one hand, if you chose a job depend on the salary it offers, you would easily get loss of motivation and as long as you continnue your work, you could experience stress and depression. Nonetheless, you can use your large amount of money your earn every month as a reward for your self, it is not able to afford your youth, more time to live or your priceless mental and physical health. As a result, many people especially the young are dealing with pressure come from their career every single day because they could not find any happiness at their work, where they spend most of their time in a day at
Last but not least, your wage depends on your quality of your work. In other words, you can have a low-paid job as long as you love it at first, and then you will be able to recieve a higher paid as you can show your boss your strength, your improvement. doing an occpation thay you enjoyable will be the best encouragement you give to yourself day by day .Therefore, in order to increase your income you should better improve your skills, knowledge and experience
In conclusion, although the money you earn benefit your life a lot, you should better take care of your feelings and doing a job that suits you most
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nonetheless, then, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48754448399 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3645966321 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7509029329 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.142857143 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1428571429 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155259965338 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872544240795 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621459190004 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122305216418 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402654622062 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.65 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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