The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo.
The pictures give information about how an igloo is built.
In general, there is a total of 13 stages in the process of creating an igloo, beginning with finding an area of hard-packed snow and ending with making some holes in the wall of this building.
Taking a closer look at the data, the first step is choosing the hard-packed snow and then sawing the snow into blocks to prepare for the construction. After that, the igloo is first created by setting the large blocks at the base before all blocks are made the edges smooth and set above others in order. Then, a hole is dug under the wall to create an entrance of the igloo, whereas, on the top of the igloo, a too-large block is set for the last opening.
The process continues with packing the snow into all crevices to make the igloo’s wall smooth as well as smooth the inside of the igloo by hand. Subsequently, you have to go out of the igloo and cover the holes with snow blocks. In the final stage, you must cut ventilation holes in the wall or on the roof to make way for light coming into the igloo.
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 78
- The diagrams illustrate the process of building an igloo 67
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- The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040 84
- Environmental damage is the problem of most countries What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility 89
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, then, well, whereas, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35820895522 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26380733345 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3993734481 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207587482006 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105269918447 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669227331107 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149423857559 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035978016476 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, then, well, whereas, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35820895522 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26380733345 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3993734481 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207587482006 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105269918447 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669227331107 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149423857559 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035978016476 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.