Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case?
As technology has advanced, and internet has continued to grow, social media has assumed a significant role in our daily lives. There are some who argue that it may have a positive impact on society, while others hold a contrary viewpoint. In this essay, I will discuss what I consider to be the benefits and some drawbacks of social media and provide my own opinion accordingly.
There are several key benefits stemming from social media. The main one is connectivity. People can now keep in touch with each other with a click on Facebook, Twitter or Tik Tok, whereas it used to take ages for them to get updated via letters or spend a fortune to make international calls. Additionally, social media provides a platform for businessmen to approach a broader range of customers in a way that traditional marketing campaign cannot always achieve. Take Tik Tok as an example, where sellers can livestream products and interact with customers in real-time. Conversely, customers can place an order while they are watching. This convenience benefits both sellers and customers.
However, there are some drawbacks associated with social media. It can be addictive, and lead to excessive use, which interferes with other aspects of life such as work, school, and relationships. In other words, people tend to have less physical contact or engage in fewer activities when they spend most of their time on social media. Besides, there is the issue of misinformation to consider. Social media can be a breeding ground for rumors, fake news, and conspiracy theories, all of which can spread quickly and have real-world consequences. For example, couple of month ago, there was a trend of drinking vinegar to stay fit, which became viral on social media that caused a lot of health problems.
In conclusion, it is ultimately undeniable that social media is an essential tool that humans need to be aware of its advantages and disadvantages. Regardless of its potential side effect, I firmly believe that it is a positive trend that promotes development and progress for the reasons mentioned above.
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| 2023-08-04 | LaraNg | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, conversely, however, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07826086957 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85918191709 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9697692868 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124637053029 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411041464805 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384405968844 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781268666484 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394442148489 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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