The bar chart illustrates the production of rice yearly in 4 different nations in 1995,2005 and 2015.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that nation A produced the largest amount of rice in the three years mentioned while the lowest million tones rice manufactured was in country D during the same period
Looking at the graph for more details, country A manufactured more and more rice over the years until reaching a peak at 50 million tonnes in 2015 while there was a sharp fluctuation in rice production yearly in country B with the lowest was about 36 tonnes and the highest was more than 40 tonnes. In addition, the first place in country B was in 2005, however, it just equals the first runner-up in country A with nearly 50 million tonnes. Moreover, in 1995, the production of rice in both nations A and B even created a few and stands in last place with about 45 and 35, respectively.
Turning to the two other countries, countries C and D produced rice smaller than the 2 countries above and the highest figure in those countries was about 5 times as low as countries A and B. In nation D, the manufacture of rice in 1995 was the same as that in 2005, with nearly 5 million tonnes.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... three years mentioned while the lowest million tones rice manufactured was in country ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50909090909 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55693838101 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.44181941 43.030603864 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.333333333 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306068248596 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190470347157 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097561179343 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236520921066 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108674388742 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... three years mentioned while the lowest million tones rice manufactured was in country ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50909090909 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55693838101 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.44181941 43.030603864 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.333333333 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306068248596 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190470347157 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097561179343 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236520921066 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108674388742 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.