Nowadays, space exploration has been a prestige for many countries. Exploring space makes us to better understand the universe and our neighbouring planets and it is essential to grab some knowledge about them. A number of individuals often argue that, investing money in space is waste of time and efforts as there are multiple issues that are to be taken care of, such as poverty and environmental destruction. However, others, including myself, believe that, understanding about the cosmos and gaining knowledge about it can helps us for the betterment of humanity.
To begin with, a primary reason to fund these programs is to establish a solid communication all around the globe. In these scenarios, plenty of satellites are being sent to the earth's orbit for the ease of communication. Because businesses and organizations are expanding geographically, they need communication channels to work in effective manner. Additionally, these satellites are not only helpful in establishing a communication but also, to broadcast signals in the form of audio and video. For instance, reputed space organization NASA has launched many satellites that are effectively used todays for many sources. Thus, investing money in space is vitally important and ideal.
On the other hand, day-to-day increase in the warming has become a concern for the whole world. Scientists have started to find an alternative planet to live. Due to these facts, more space programs are being conducted and eventually, more funding is an absolute necessity. To illustrate, ISRO, which is an Indian space organization have launched Chandrayan-3, to know more facts about the moon is funded by the Indian government. Thus, due to the rapidly increasing environmental issues, there is an urge to find an alternative planet for our future generations.
In conclusion, while the global issues are inevitable, it is imperative that we continue to explore space. This can promote more technological advancements as well as a possible alternative planet to escape. Therefore, all nations should cooperate in the advancement of space research.
- Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things What is your opinion 84
- The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia Darwin 1 Sydney 2 Melbourne 3 Brisbane 4 Perth 5 and Canberra 6 in October 2009 and October 2010 73
- People today generally have better lives than people in the past did To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people We can learn just as much from books films and the internet Do you agree or disagree 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...smos and gaining knowledge about it can helps us for the betterment of humanity. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18228567994 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7941646393 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161504829579 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533879638725 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545891423132 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967001309835 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235647151089 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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