In the past two decades, there was a sudden increase in the production of cars and its usage, they are used in urban as well as, in rural areas. These vehicles have provided an easy and comfortable transportation, and also had a huge impact on the lives of people. Many individuals often argue that the vehicle drivers are responsible for the road systems; however, others, including myself believe that the government should take care of situations of the roads for betterment of people.
A number of individuals, believe that the car drivers should take the responsibilty due to the overuse of the roads. Compared to other means of transport, like a motorcycle, a car obviously occupies more space but also, damages the quality of the road due to its large size and weight. For instance, it was estimated that in Thailand in 2015 that, the number of private cars made up to 85% of the total vehicles commuting on the roads. As a result, it is evident that there is an urge for the expansion and efficiency development for the safe and comfortable transportation. Therefore, it is reasonable to assign the cost of road systems to the car drivers.
However, I believe that, the expenditure on the road infrastructure should be incurred by the government for multiple reasons. Firstly, main goal of the higher authorities is to fulfil the basic requirements and enhancing the living standards of the people. Furthermore, developments of the roads can be beneficial for the country's economy and it should be prioritized first. Secondly, the majority of the countries charge a high amount of tax in order to own a car and drive on roads, and therefore, it is unfair to solely lay responsibility on the shoulders of car drivers. For example, in Vietnam the government charges about 40-45% tax for car prices. therefore, it is better to invest that money on the road infrastructure, rather than forcing people to pay it.
In conclusion, although, many individuals often argue that, responsibility of road infrastructure should be layed on car owners and it is also quite convincing to some extent. I believe that, the government should take the full responsibility of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 657, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96164383562 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06287891487 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501369863014 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.517743027 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283703054571 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953804981087 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054925674902 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173185555665 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355158223887 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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