Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities To what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead to a lack of knowledge. Moreover, excessively exercise could be detrimenta...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...orking out should be equally to support in a positive way for child’s development.Parents must un...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Parents
... a positive way for child’s development.Parents must understand that those two are need...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...focus more on one thing over the other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16587677725 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63669866882 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2698738563 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305281755577 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127303244959 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885925701066 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190959440553 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875420475527 0.056905535591 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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