The two line charts manifest the alteration in the right of possession of electrical apparatuses and number of time taken to do household chores in one nation over a period of 99 years.
In 1920, the percentage utilization of refrigerator was 0%, which surged to over 50% and 90% in 1940 and 1960 respectively. In the year of 1980, it had a steady increase by 10% and leveled off 100% throughout the next years. The percentage using vacuum cleaner and washing mechine had a minuscule difference ( 30% and 40% for each), which augmented by 10% in 1940 and rose to the similar level (at 70%) after 20 years. Following that years, they had contrasting trends. The utilization of vacuum cleaner grew to 90% in 1980 and unchanging from 2000 to 2019, while the using of washing mechanic slightly fell in1980 ( under 70%) and increased again to roughly 70% in following years.
In 1920, amount of time do do housework was a half, which decreased gradually in 1940 and 1960 (over 30% amd 20% respectively). It flattened out over 10% from 1980 to 2000 and declined again to one in ten in 2019.
Overall, the percentage of electrical gadgets in households were increasing whereas amout of time weeky to do housework was falling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of washing mechanic slightly fell in1980 under 70% and increased again to roughly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72641509434 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73641828821 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8553463087 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141548274825 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062392105519 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651743249911 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118063709636 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581380445139 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.