Many businesses perceive their personnels need more fundenmental interperson experiments. This essay serves to give me an insight into the importance of these skills and several solution to deal with it.
This issue can be associated with certain factors. Firstly, due to ever abusing technology devices as well as a number of people which go out to meet other ones, are noticeable going up. As we know, technology is a vital part of people’s lives. It assists lives of them more handy such as faster communication, receiving respones immediately, etc. For example, a administrator, who wants to ask their inferiors something, can utilize a phone to sent this question. Besides that, a second reason is the number of people who aren’t fond of reading books about interaction skills. Since people can’t gain their grasp. So, when they have a problematic circumstance with cilents, they can’t treat rationally.
There are a few actions that could be taken in order to alleviate this problem. Corresponding to first cause, we should restrict contact by high-technology devices. Instead that, we ought to directly meet to tacket problem and enhance myself communication experiments. And second reason can be addressed by manufacturing more that books with numerous significant approaches and designing attractive covers. Furthermore, it’s crucial to raise the public’s awareness. To do that, every school should offer more lessons relating to interaction. So, all young generations can be accept and exert them in their daily activity.
In conclusion, lack of interaction skills due to using technology devices to much and less reading. To alleviate this issue, we should limit utilize them and look for to read those books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
...into the importance of these skills and several solution to deal with it. This issue can be ass...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...respones immediately, etc. For example, a administrator, who wants to ask their i...
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Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...reading books about interaction skills. Since people can’t gain their grasp. So, when...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ict contact by high-technology devices. Instead that, we ought to directly meet to tack...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... skills due to using technology devices to much and less reading. To alleviate thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3663003663 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01825722766 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655677655678 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1281733086 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1052631579 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804037819091 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237745526333 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378186779123 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649015538446 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524026580337 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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