The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The graph shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005. The horizontal scale consists of the countries along with the year and the vertical axis comprises of the number of magazines sold pr person.
The blue bar represents the number of magazines sold in 2003, orange represents the number of magazines sold in 2005 and the pink represents the projected sales in 2007. As seen from the graph, the number of magazines sold in 2003 in country A and B is close to 50 but it is significantly dropping as we go from country C to country E, with around 38 magazines old in country C, about 19 sold in country D and around 5 sold in country E. However, a minor reduction in sales is seen in countries A, B and C in 2005 when compared to 2003, with around 45 magazines sold in country A, about 48 in country B and around 35 in country C. But in countries D and E, a minor increase in sales is observed in 2005 with a sales of about 20 in country D and around 8 in country E. The projected sales for 2007 shows a significant decrease in countries A, B C and E, with around 38 in A, around 45 in B, around 33 in C and around 5 in E. However, in country D, the projected sales shows a significant increase to around 25 in 2007.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...ong with the year and the vertical axis comprises of the number of magazines sold pr person....
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... number of magazines sold pr person. The blue bar represents the number of magaz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12653061224 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57937224588 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.351020408163 0.561755894193 62% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1554324599 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351962075431 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2174277381 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806654914636 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320586125467 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260876066151 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.87 50.2224549098 149% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.27 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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