Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
No doubt globalisation has taken place in many countries since decades. Many people believe that it is creating altogether a new culture and disappearing identitites instead, whereas few think otherwise. In this essay, we will discuss advantages and disadvantages about the former statement and I will present my view by supporting examples.
To start with, the globalisation is significantly increased in various countires. It has not led to only exchange goods and commodities at the international level, but the musical as well as the human resources. For instance, many asian countries has adapted western culture. With the help of internationalisation, few underdeveloping nations have transformed to developing nation. Further more, the Information Technology business has tremendously outgrown all over the world.
However, there are several disadvantages for the same. Due to globalisation, people in many countries who migrates to another place may face major cultural loss which eventually destroy the cultural identitites. Likewise, the people who adapt western tradition may suffer local business and vanish small and medium business. For example, the small business for clothing in India has effected because of international products. Another example, the pop musicians unknowingly had covereed the traditional artists making them jobless. Additionally, the migration of young citizens of developing nations in search of better lifestyle rises to inflation making poor country poorer.But, it can we controlled on an individual for betterment of their own country.
To sum up, I agree that despite of globalisation which has multiple advantages like creating another common culture of developement, the national identities of various aspects has been on the verge of the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...to inflation making poor country poorer.But, it can we controlled on an individual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76691729323 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32018531182 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654135338346 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1302686415 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156291248021 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420182591228 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500804263414 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974337216196 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403054800783 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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