From time immemorial, humans have built devices to make their lives easier. From the early men building spears to hunt and defend themselves to building artificial intelligence applications; technology has greatly improved but so has societal problems been more dexterous. Our lives will continue to get better as science and technology continues to develop, but all society's problem cannot be eradicated; especially those arising from man's greed and self-centredness.
Science and technology has no doubt made live so much better. In the 19th century, malaria was a death sentence. It will take days to travel from Europe to Africa, as the only route was through the sea. We could only communicate with our loved ones far away through letters and many of the comfort we enjoy today as a result of the rapid development of technology in the 20th and 21st century were not present.
As science continues to grow, many of the world's current challenges will also be solved. These challenges are captured in the United Nation's Sustainable Development Goals (UN SDGs) commission in 2015. For example, SDG13, climate change which the United Nations refers to as the most crucial challenge of our time can be solved using technology that world help us reach net zero. Developing reneqable energy technologies, storage, carbon capture and utilization (CCUS) etc. will put us in the track to net zero by 2050. Also, as research progresses, we will be able to solve current incurable diseases like HIV/AIDS, cancer, hepatitis, high-blood presseure etc. Development in technology can also help us ameliorate food problem, and improvement in technology will result in many other advanmcement in many facets of live.
However, no matter how technology improves, all society's problem cannot be solved. This is especially true for problems caused by human's self-centredness. For example, what technology can solve discrimination, racism, wars, violence, crime, capitalism, bad governance etc. What technology can prevent wars like that happeneing in Ukraine from happening?
Also, human wants, needs and problems evolve. Who would have predicted COVID-19 pandemic? As certain problems are solved some others, mostly unintended are created. For example, are we satisfied our energy needs using fossil fuel, we were heating up our planet and causing climate change.
In conclusion, technology can help solve a lot of society's problems and make human lives better, but cannot solve all society's problem. Having more selfless, understanding and empathetic people in the world will help solve some problems technology cannot solve. But a question we must even ask is, will there every be a time when there will be o problem in society? Will that society be worth living in?
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... Our lives will continue to get better as science and technology continues to dev...
^^
Line 11, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...eople in the world will help solve some problems technology cannot solve. But a question...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32723112128 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84712704475 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560640732265 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4641852384 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8076923077 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453838540165 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113705138969 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100095831601 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217124885478 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1182492178 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... Our lives will continue to get better as science and technology continues to dev...
^^
Line 11, column 229, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...eople in the world will help solve some problems technology cannot solve. But a question...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32723112128 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84712704475 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560640732265 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4641852384 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5384615385 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8076923077 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453838540165 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113705138969 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100095831601 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217124885478 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1182492178 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.